Full Skeleton Study

Here are both of my full skeleton study so far.

Torso Ribs

Here is my torso drawing we critiqued in class.

I notice a women manikin is cut in half through the stomach area where a secondary stand is placed below it for support. I notice the manikin is placed near the upper left corner of the stand and angled at a 45 degree position from the corner of the stand to give a focus direction for the viewer. I notice the shadow being cast from a light source coming from the upper right hand gives the manikin a sense of depth and 3d form feel to it. I notice the colored necklace on the manikin's neck, sets a contrast on the overall look of the manikin.

I notice the dull gray color in the background makes up 80% of the composition. I notice the light pink heart with a male part sticking out, creates a focus point on the composition. I notice the outlines around the heart-like-shape creates a contrast for viewers oppose to the background. I notice the very small text at the bottom of the page is center proportionately to the paper size. I notice the small text is hard to read from a far distance.

I notice the bottles have a glassy feel to them. I notice the bottles are lined up side by side proportionately. I notice the bands around each bottle. I notice the bottles are set on a shelf like stand. I notice the lighting is casting shadows from a right angle. I notice there are different shapes and sizes that makes some bottles different from each other. I notice the bottles in the back are taller than the ones in the front which allows the viewers to see them from far back.

Germany Art #2

I notice a ship and some lines dropping down to a octopus like creature. I notice the octopus creature is at the bottom right of the paper. I notice some wrinkle folds in the paper. I notice the ship is near at the top of the page and above the water shapes. I notice the background of the ship is a tan color. I notices shadings on the ships to show a sense of depth. I notice the water turning to a lighter tone as it drops down to the bottom of the page.

Germany Art #1

I notice gaps between thin and thick lines. I notice there is a tan or brown color to the type of ink or material that was used. I noticed the markings are made more towards the upper right of the paper. I notice the word NOT is at the bottom left of the paper.